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FROM SARAH A. HOYT:
Family! Can’t live with them and can’t eat them.
Tom Ormson, owner — with his girlfriend — of The George, a diner in downtown Goldport, Colorado is well on his way to becoming a responsible and respectable adult, despite his rough start and the fact that he turns into a dragon.
But then the unpredictable Colorado weather, the ancient leader of a dragon triad and an even more ancient shifter-enforcer combine to destroy his home, put his diner at risk and attempt to kill him.
All this, of course, has to happen while Tom’s friend, Rafiel, is trying to solve a series of murders-by-shark at the city aquarium, and Tom’s newly-reconciled father is attempting to move to Denver.
Fasten your seat belts, a wild ride is about to begin.
Originally published by Baen Books.
Tom Ormson and Kyrie Smith are suffering the growing pains of young romance and young business people. Tom worries obsessively about the new fryer in the diner exploding. As though he didn’t have enough on his mind, though, life decides it’s time for a sabre-tooth with vengeance on her mind to come to town, and for the Great Sky Dragon to try to arrange a marriage for Tom. Meanwhile, out at the old amusement park, the one with the really good wooden roller-coaster, a series of bizarre murders is taking place. And, as if that were not enough, Conan Lung, dragon shifter, ex-triad member and waiter extraordinaire starts his country singing career with an original song “If I Could Fly to You.” When Kyrie is kidnapped, it’s all Tom can do to make sure he protects her while not eating anyone. With new afterword by author. Originally published by Baen books.
Bowl of Red – 99Chttps://amzn.to/475FinM
At the top of a tall mountain, there lives a dragon. And the dragon is the master of all animals.
Okay, let’s rewind that. Tom Ormson is a dragon shifter, the scion of a line that was created to rule both Chinese and Norse dragons. But he doesn’t want the job. He co-owns a diner with his wife, Kyrie, who is about to deliver their first child.
In fact, they just got married, when the entire shifter-world, which centers on their diner goes insane.
You see, it is a time of Ragnarok, which means all of the shifter clans are in turmoil, with changing leadership. And the lion clan, to which Kyrie belongs has just lost its leader. Poor Rafiel, too, is tormented by very strange dreams and premonitions. Also, the Queen of the Norse dragons has woken, and wants a word with the Great Sky Dragon.
Hold on to your hats. A wild ride is about to begin, with Tom, Kyrie and their friends at the center of it.
When it ends, the world will never be the same again.
It is New Year’s Day in Goldport Colorado, the most shifter-infested town in the known universe.
At the George — the diner where shifters gather — Kyrie is about to give birth, Tom is getting psychic messages from the Great Sky Dragon and Rafiel is looking for information on why the mayor exploded.
Fasten your seat belts. This is going to be a fast ride into adventure and shape-shifting, after which things will never be the same.
When D’Artagnan, Athos, Porthos and Aramis discover the corpse of a beautiful woman who looks like the Queen of France, they vow to see that justice is done. They do not know that their investigation will widen from murder to intrigue to conspiracy, bring them the renewed enmity of Cardinal Richelieu and shake their fate in humanity. Through duels and doubts, they pursue the truth, even when their search brings them to the sphere of King Louis XIII himself and makes them confront secrets best forgotten.
THE REST OF THE BOOKS!
FROM JERRY BOYD: Kid Stuff (Bob and Nikki Book 41)
While checking into the fleet’s poor reception at Oak, Bob finds out the reason. The Emperor was busy with other things, and he needs Bob’s help to get them sorted out. Bob and the Gene ride to the rescue, only to find a whole new bunch of folks they need to understand.
FROM MARK TINDELL: A 10-Foot Christmas Tree
Eva had just escaped from an oppressive relationship with a guy who hated holidays, especially Christmas. She, on the other hand, loved the holiday so much that the deprivation had been painful. Now that she was free, she was determined to have the best Christmas ever. Her new roommate, Betts, liked Christmas and everything that came with it, so she was the perfect partner for Eva’s crazy plans. Betts was even willing to join in the interminable search for the perfect Christmas tree, although the variety was dizzying. Betts ex-boyfriend, Lee, was dragged into the search as well, supposedly only as driver. He and scrawny assistant muscle Roddy tried to stick to the toting and stay out of the adventure, but that never works, does it?
FROM MAX COSSAK: Zarah’s Fire
Human traffickers have kidnapped ten-year-old Zarah to an alien desert. Frightened for her safety and disgusted by her captors’ plans for terrorist attacks on a nearby city, Zarah escapes in the dead of night and begins a dangerous trek across the wilderness. On her flight she encounters predators and helpers; smugglers and saints; threats and kindness. Meanwhile friends of her murdered father go all out to find her and save her.
FROM I. M. LERNER: The Secret Under the Staircase (Under the Staircase – An Economic Adventure Series for Kids)
“So, you’re the ones…”
A mysterious package appears just as Maya and Nate start helping in their grandparents’ store. Inside is just one book: a faded copy of Free to Choose. In a race against time, they must decipher a series of cryptic messages to discover the secret under the staircase. But can a bunch of kids really solve the centuries-old riddle? Can they save their beloved town before it’s too late?Under the Staircase™ Books
A mystery and adventure series that teaches treasured values: personal responsibility, individual liberty, and economic freedom.Psst! Parents & Teachers: The first book in the series introduces a variety of Milton Friedman’s concepts—the Power of the Market, the Tyranny of Controls, What’s Wrong with Our Schools?, and other topics—using examples from kids’ day-to-day lives in school, with friends, and in familiar situations.
FROM HOLLY CHISM: Detritus
Nick Bryant was a junkie. Lived on the streets, and everything. And then, he saved a baby girl from drowning, and fell into the role of protector. As he, the baby, and her older brother get to know one another, he decides that maybe, there’s more left to him than the drugs, and decides to try to live again. And maybe build a family.
FROM CELIA HAYES AND JEANNE HAYDEN: The Luna City Compendium #1: The Chronicles of Luna City, The Second Chronicle of Luna City, and Luna City 3.1
The first three volumes of the Luna City Chronicles , with expanded maps of the area, and of the town itself:
The Chronicles of Luna City
Welcome to Luna City, Karnes County, Texas … Population 2,453, not counting a fugitive former celebrity chef…
Welcome to Luna City, Texas – a small town, rather like the one which almost everyone wishes they lived in, full of mild eccentricity, friendly neighbors and now and again the focus for things like a curse on the high school football team homecoming game, a stolen hoard of 19th century gold coins, where a movie crew is doing locations shooting for a major motion picture, and the little cafe on town square is being run by a runaway celebrity chef … and then there is the Age of Aquarius Campground and Goat Farm, run by a pair of 60’s drop-outs…
Where the high school football team is called the Mighty Fighting Moths … and their yearly Homecoming game is under some strange and irregular curse.
Which was once meant to be a stop on the San Antonio and Aransas Pass Railroad, but which was derailed by True Love …
Where half the townsfolk has the surname of Gonzalez or Gonzales, they’re all related and descended from the holder of the original Spanish land grant… but no one has ever been able to figure out whether his name ended in an ‘s’ or a ‘z’, due to illegible handwriting on the original paperwork …
Where the last two members of a Sixties hippy nudist commune still still keep the faith with peace, love, and organic vegetables at the Age of Aquarius Campground and Goat Farm …
And a historic marker on Town Square marks the spot where a local bootlegger was nearly hung in 1926 for (among a long list of offenses against the laws of God and Man) impersonating a nun.
Luna City, where eccentricity is just a part of every-day life. Drop in for a visit – you might never want to leave.
The Second Chronicle of Luna City
Welcome to Luna City, Texas – a small town, rather like the one which almost everyone wishes they lived in, full of mild eccentricity, friendly neighbors and now and again the focus for things like a curse on the high school football team homecoming game, a stolen hoard of 19th century gold coins, where a movie crew is doing locations shooting for a major motion picture, and the little cafe on town square is being run by a runaway celebrity chef … and then there is the Age of Aquarius Campground and Goat Farm, run by a pair of 60’s drop-outs…
Luna City 3.1
Welcome to Luna City, Karnes County, Texas … Population 2,454. This does not count the strangers come to town, searching for the fabulous Mills treasure-hoard, the seldom-seen Agua Dulce ghost-horsemen, and the mysterious lights spotted floating over the highway on one dark and moonless night.
Ex-celebrity chef, Richard Astor-Hall (formerly Rich Hall, the Bad Boy Chef) has his hands full managing the Luna Café and Coffee … plus some outside catering jobs … and a fund-raising charity event in which he might be drafted into playing a much bigger part than he agreed on at the start. A touch of mystery, a bit of possible romance … in this third serving of small-town Texas life in Luna City, where eccentricity is just a part of every-day life. Drop in for a visit – you might never want to leave.
FROM ALMA T. C. BOYKIN: Familiar Tales
Smiley Lorraine: Wolverine. Rosie Jones: 100-lb. Skunk. Morgana Lorraine: Witch with Editorial Problems.
Welcome to a world where Familiars choose magic workers, and a few others, as their partners. A world of adventure, tax-deductions, bad publisher tricks, and odd veterinary clinics, where wolverines wear glasses and iguanas sing along with the radio—badly—while casting spells and keeping their chosen humans out of mischief.
Or try to.
(Five short-stories.)
FROM SABRINA CHASE: The Long Way Home (Sequoyah Book 1)
Run to Danger
Moire Cameron ran to protect her secrets — ran to the heart of an interstellar alien war. Her fellow mercenaries care only about her fighting skills, not where — or when — she got them. You’d think that would be good enough…
But a false name and fake ID can’t conceal her dangerous lack of contemporary knowledge, and they won’t help fulfill her last order, given by a dying man eighty years ago. To do that she must find a reason to live again. A cause worth fighting for, comrades to trust, and a ship to sail the stars.
A tale of adventure, survival, and loyalty in the tradition of Firefly and Louis McMaster Bujold.
Book I of the Sequoyah trilogy.
FROM LEIGH KIMMEL: The Secret of Pad 34
Who would put a ceiling on humanity’s expansion into space?
That’s what Gus Grissom wants to know. While fishing offshore from Cape Canaveral, he glimpses a mysterious undersea city of unearthly geometries, marked with a strange three-armed cross symbol.
His efforts to research it bring him veiled threats from strangers at his door. Trouble blights an exemplary career. However, Gus refuses to be cowed into silence, and pursues every lead he can find.
HP Lovecraft wrote that we live on a placid island of ignorance and were not meant to travel far. This is the Space Race in a world where the Soviet Union is not our only adversary.
FROM PAM UPHOFF: Aslanov (Chronicles of the Fall Book 1)
The Three Hundred Families control the Three Part Alliance. To the Elite, their Family is their first priority.
Twenty years before the Fall . . .
Lord Dzon Konstantin Aslanov returns Home after a five year long assignment to another World to find his Family as poor a fit as ever. He is about to find out the cost of disobedience.
If only they’d tell Konstantin why he needed to marry so soon, to the right woman. And not like his idiot brother eloping with . . . the daughter of Kon’s new boss at the Bureau of Intelligence. And why should Kon marry this particular woman when her aunt was so much more interesting . . .
As Kon investigates government contract fraud, he begins to suspect his Family is involved . . .
And the consequences . . . deadly
Vignettes by Luke, Mary Catelli and ‘Nother Mike.
So what’s a vignette? You might know them as flash fiction, or even just sketches. We will provide a prompt each Sunday that you can use directly (including it in your work) or just as an inspiration. You, in turn, will write about 50 words (yes, we are going for short shorts! Not even a Drabble 100 words, just half that!). Then post it! For an additional challenge, you can aim to make it exactly 50 words, if you like.
We recommend that if you have an original vignette, you post that as a new reply. If you are commenting on someone’s vignette, then post that as a reply to the vignette. Comments — this is writing practice, so comments should be aimed at helping someone be a better writer, not at crushing them. And since these are likely to be drafts, don’t jump up and down too hard on typos and grammar.
If you have questions, feel free to ask.
Your writing prompt this week is: cry















Cry Havoc and unleash the Dragons Of War!
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“The beacons are lit! The beacons are lit! Hundor calls for aid!”
“And the Bookwyrms shall answer.”
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ooh, a Bob and Nikki Just ain’t in the mood for Rachel or Icarus right now. no idea why
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Figured it’d be appropriate to shift to this bunch.
“Father? Are you here?”
“Of course, Maylis,” Amadeo answered, greeting his oldest daughter with a warm smile. “I’m glad to see both you and Her Majesty returned safely. How did the summit go?”
“Well,” she said, her smile at seeing her father fading into a cool, neutral expression. “I don’t see Her Majesty, King Kylian, and King Friedrich’s forces having any issues cooperating, at least until that damnable Mad Empress goes to her eternal reward. After that, who can say, especially with Alphonse Faucher as Loire’s Chosen.”
“Too true.” Amadeo concurred, checking on another of his plants. Maylis was very much aware of what could have happened if Alphonse had been on active duty rather than a disgraced exile when he and Jacinthe had eloped, much less what would have happened if he had been Sadalmelik’s Chosen at the time. There was no need for either of them to rehash it, yet he couldn’t help but wonder. “What was your impression of him, Maylis?”
“He isn’t much of a conversationalist,” she began. “Yet he conducted himself like a gentleman at all times and he was never known to cause any trouble while living in Ampthill. Whether any of that was out of simple self-preservation or it is a reflection on his true character, I cannot say.”
Amadeo nodded before he turned to the subject he was most curious about: “How did Carys and Vincent react to the thought of working together?”
“I think merely not having to fight each other as long as Her Majesty and King Friedrich remain on amicable terms is enough for both of them,” Maylis sighed. “They have a lot to work out between them, Father. We both know that.”
“They do, but I have faith that they will do so.” the sorcerer said with a smile, turning his attention to another plant.
“They had better,” Maylis concurred, shifting the rifle on her back to a more comfortable position. “If he makes her cry again I absolutely will find a way to send him to Hell once and for all.”
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Totally off topic.
ST:TOS “Space Seed” playing on the local oldies channel.
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Christmas Day is drawing near, spreading hope and cheer.
Remember what’s important and treasure what you hold dear.
Yuletide greetings to all and a Happy New Year!
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Hear, hear!
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A fire crackled on the hearth at Sparta Point. Elaine wrapped her hands around the mug of hot cocoa and remembered another fireside moment — had it been a year? Sometimes it seemed so recent, and at other times it seemed like another lifetime that Ted Alandale had taken his household to one of the ski resorts at Tahoe during the week between Christmas and New Year’s.
That evening she’d sat beside a fireplace in the ski lodge, listening to the more experienced skiers topping each other’s stories about close calls on the double black diamond trails. There’d been hot cocoa there too, albeit made differently than Tamara’s, or any other hot cocoa she’d ever tasted. And the platters of goodies that the staff had brought around — she could almost taste the little cakes, the squares of fudge–
A yowl brought her back to the present. This was lion country — how far away could you hear the cry of a queen mountain lion in heat?
She looked around the living room, studying the expressions of Spartan’s Own for any sign of alarm, but saw only relaxation. Spartan himself was over by the archway to the dining room, talking with Mikhael Yehuda.
Nothing to worry about. The cat probably had a lair well away from the old ranger station, and no inclination to come any closer, especially if she knew the area well enough to know these rough men habitually went armed, and were crack shots. And Elaine had no reason to go outside at this hour, in the rain.
But the moment was lost, and could not be recovered. Elaine stared into the flames, remembering the intensity but staying firmly anchored in the present.
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She crept on, alert with every sense for any sign.
It was no cry that alerted her but the sight of light ahead. Ciara doused her own light at a gesture, and the tunnel dimmed, and looked more orange.
The light came around a corner, but its dancing was clear.
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The cries from the crowd were just as jubilant at seeing them go as seeing them arrive. Then, she thought they felt no fear. Liam at least was happier, and smiled and waved to the crowd. She smiled herself, but she knew she was only his consort in their eyes.
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Hey!! That cover of Detritus shows a “ginnel”!
I was so excited to hear Az from Heel vs. Babyface use a northern English word like that, when he was playing a Witcher videogame.
And the other day, while playing Dark Souls 3, he described a passageway as a “snicket.” (Although some people say a snicket has to have greenery and drainage ditches, and that one just had zombies.)
It makes me so happy, because I like to hear those words out in the wild, living in the cyber world. :)
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Prince Espar looked too young for his age. It was an odd thing to think, especially since he couldn’t be more than a year younger than Kailen, likely not even that. But he did.
Probably something you got by growing up in Sigfrey’s Towers, rather than the streets of Lower Whitecliffe. That sort of innocence, that sort of lightness. That pride, too – he knelt before Sigfrey’s Lightgiver, but his shoulders did not bend. His eyes only wavered from the high priest’s face to glance at Kailen and Foray on either side, a smile flashing over his features for an instant before being swallowed again by a look of solemnity that seemed slightly forced.
As pale smoke and the heavy smell of incense rose from the brazier in his arms, Kailen wondered whether that smile was meant to taunt or reassure. He didn’t know the prince, would never see him again after the anointing. He probably wouldn’t even think of him again, except in passing. But if his younger brother was anything to go by – if what he’d seen of ‘Respi’ earlier when the little prince escaped his tutors was real, and not an act – it was probably meant to be friendly.
Odd. They lived so far above everyone else, even by Avigar’s standards. But they didn’t act like it at all.
“– Majesty,” the Lightbearer intoned, lifting his gaze to the king. “Do you here pronounce Espar, eldest son of Sigfrey’s Chosen, Prince-in-Waiting and Beloved of Light, to be your chosen heir?”
Espar did not turn his head, did not look towards his father. But Kailen thought he saw a flicker of nervousness in his eyes, and something like doubt. If the prince were an enemy, now would be the time to strike. But he wasn’t, and there was no need for a fight, no matter how uncomfortable Kailen was with the enormous crowd behind him.
King Gelar smiled, his Queen’s hand looped through his own. Kailen wasn’t quite sure how to parse his expression, but the smile looked real, and there was no cruelty in it. So it was probably safe. “I do.”
There was a noise from far behind Kailen, something like a quickly stifled cry. It wasn’t close enough to be one of the dukes arrayed behind him, and it came from directly behind rather than off to the left or right, where the lords stood. So it probably came from somewhere among the crowd.
It didn’t sound right.
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For my own satisfaction, I’m going to try and copy this over again without it being just a block of text, as well as the other part I had written.
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Karl followed his gaze. The knights looked ordinary enough. Even the blazons on their tunics boasted of the most ordinary of domains. But in their midst, heavily chained, was a half-naked man with butterfly wings of the darkest blue on his back. His hair was of the same color.
Worthy a cry of surprise. Or two. Karl wondered even as they walked toward them whether they avoided the villages and towns and cities. The shortening of the distances would not hasten the journey if crowds came to gawk.
The necromancer looked at them.
So would crowds fleeing that, causing havoc.
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Aaargh. WPDE. Not sure if this is my fault for writing such a long ‘short,’ or the dumb program’s. Let’s see if this can make it through –
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Chop it into multiple comments if you have to. I hit the comment limit (around 800 words or so? I think. Might be 1200 or more, somewhere in there) a lot, too. Really have to try to keep things short some times.
And I’m really bad at short stuff. All my short stories tend to sound like parts of multi-volume series or something.
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I know that pain…
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I dimly remember something about a limit of 8,000 characters in comments. That translates to around 1,300 words, or less if you use a lot of long words.
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Hmm. Good to know… Thanks!
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“Why do you cry?”
The question was not a rude one. Not from the alien Kthhk. Uriah assumed they knew, more or less, what the physical act of tears was. Emotions did not seem to translate so well.
“Because…” He hiccuped, swiping his face with bloodied hands.
“Because I’m so fucking USELESS!”
The furry insectoid tilted its head. It was an innocent seeming movement. Like a curious dog might, he’d always thought.
“I’m useless because I can only do one thing. Can’t fight. Can’t cook. Can’t fix things. Can’t summon magics or build golems or pull water from the air.”
As if that wasn’t enough.
“Can’t lead. Can’t plan strategy, or scrounge for useful gear, or do anything that might even remotely be something we so desperately need.”
Uriah sniffed. He was making a bloody mess of himself, but just couldn’t stop.
“Can’t sing. Can’t even make myself run away. I’m the worst sort of utterly broken, useless, shallow, and pathetic. Can’t even be bad. Can’t be good or even good at anything at all that matters.”
The alien was nothing more than a soft brown blur in the corner of his eye, still looking at him with those weirdly glowing eyes.
“All I can do-” a wet, gross sob interrupted his harsh whisper of self hatred.
“All I can do is heal. I can’t even bring back the dead.”
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Heartbreak in a snippet, this one. Well done!
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The scratching rub of the stone on the blade made a softer, slower kin to his song’s words and tune and beat; he left off the second a few moments to enjoy the first, then went on.
“Hang down your head…”
“Goss?” He’d stopped on the instant (funny how your own name was one of a few things you’d know before anything, even when you could hear it barely at all), and now replied, “Molly? I’m up here, cleanin’ granddaddy’s old clayvay again.” He’d never stopped, never faltered in that first beat.
(Clayvay — as claymore was really ‘claidhmeadh mhor’ that ought by all right to be clayvor, so clayvay was ‘claidhmeadh bheag’ — though that so called ‘little sword’ was the size of a cavalry saber, it was far-enough behind the huge ‘big sword’ old broadsword.)
His cousin’s steps climbing the stairs were energetic, but in that very particular way that meant, too often, interest and care. And sure-enough it was her, known from only one short half-heard word.
“Goassamer August Moon, here you are sharpening that old sword, and even singing that old song, that one, too. Now tell me, please, you’re truly not about to go all full traditional on someone, do?” Hands on hips, feet spread and braced, the picture of someone about to deal in trouble, to deal with trouble or perhaps even deal it out. Said in that particular way of women trying to get men to agree, to surrender right off.
“Some things need an answer, Molly. You’ve likely heard what I mean. And if you doubt that, Emolument Joanna Dark, recall your repetition of those old first-world words.” His hands were steadily busy, but a jerk and toss of his head pointed out — clear enough for both — a bright bit of stitchery on his wall, framed in fine-cut chestnut. Hers, given to him.
“For evil to triumph, it is enough for good men to do nothing.”
— Edmund Burke (O-W)
Maybe the words weren’t perfectly the same, over the Crossing from one threaded world to another, but the meaning and elegance was. So much of the Learning was like that — maybe not perfect but still good-enough.
He’d’ve taken up the song, again, if she’d not been there, if this had not been the kind of moment it would’ve been a challenge to her. So he let his busy, steady hands speak for themselves.
Though his throat yearned thirstily, to say also, “Fee Blevins.”
“Goss.” Molly had come to sit, no presumption at all in it only intimacy, in the chair on the other side of the low table — ‘coffee table’ in the old words from the old world, where their people had been ‘hillbillies’ and worse, ‘backwards’ to so many so ‘mainstream’ — facing him in his cloth-upholstered chair. Him and his clayvay, him and the song he’d been singin’… but now, as she faced him, the stance and the tone of voice and the… attitude were gone. Now, it was one well-known person to another such, not one talking down from above.
“Molly?” His hands did not falter or break their rhythm, yet.
“I’d not dream o’ tryin’ to say ever you ought to do nothing, like it says on that gift from me of yours on that wall. I heard what happened to that girl down by the Border…”
“Felicity Joy Blevins, Molly. Say her name, and never forget it.” Goss did not look up, or scold or hector as he said it. But it was a thing old from before the Crossing that not-a-one of their ancestors had done anything (known) to provoke or invite: when wrong is done to one not deserving, always remember the name the wrongdoers want and mean to erase, along with all the wrong they’d done that’n.
“Goss. Please. Take a moment, or a few, listen and look at me.” There was little pleading in her voice, and much earnest request. Not honoring it, that’d surely’ve been a challenge too. So he stopped; and only in stopping felt how tense his muscles had been.
“I’ll not dispute what happened to her was wrong. Not trying to do that, couldn’t do it decent if I tried. There she was, rock on the road, wagon axle broken, walkin’ the few miles into a Border town she only half knew, with an eighty-pound iron fine-casting in her hands.” Even Molly had to take a breath, there, before even trying to resume.
(It might weigh a good bit, but it was too easy to come across and steal, and also too hard to ignore. Being dropped, one and all, into a world and history where pre-Industrial-Revolution technology still ruled, where the very habits of thought of a ‘modern’ world had never been… had put the ancestors of the highlanders in an oddly-backwards position. So much so, their descendants made the best steel in the Kingdom, on either side of the Atlantic, here in the half-wild Coombrian Hills. That carefully cast and worked hunk of iron was better than a gilt-edge letter of credit from the far-off Bank of London, at showing how her folks could pay.)
He did. “And yes, that — kingsman, on his ‘short cut’ through our Border lands — he might’ve rode her down on the roadside careless or ignorant in a dim twilight; there’s no way he turned back by accident, stuck his sword through her guts by accident, wiped his blade on her hair by accident, or spit on her by anything like accident.” Much as his hands had come to itch to take up their recent work as he said it, itch and burn to, he forebore.
(Joy’d not lived. But she’d lived long enough to tell all her tale.)
He pointed to another deftly-framed piece of Molly’s careful work instead. With his index finger, now, in a more-customary way.
“Better to light a candle,
Than curse the darkness;
Better yet to light a balefire,
And fence all darkness back.”
— Endurance James Doss, AD 2075
(From which the Balefire Books, that first compendium from the Learning ever printed out on paper, had been named. Brighter than a candle by far.)
“Goss. Look at me, do look at me, and this time take my hands.” Which she offered, open, over the table and space between.
Which he took, wordlessly, in an earnest intimate double handclasp.
“I’m not about to dispute what happened to her was wrong. Not tryin’ to do it, couldn’t do it. I’m not tryin’ to say it’s a thing we ought ‘let pass’ or ‘let slide’ in the old words, not at all not one bit. Also not sayin’ you or we ought ever leave this work all to others.
“What I’m askin’ you, August Moon, is what I asked: are you meanin’, now, to do this full-traditional, and all? Strike down that man, so called by the ignorant and haughty, of the King in London and the Governors in Tryon Palace and Richmond Manor… all by yoursel’ with our Grandpappy’s bright old sword? Or, are you willin’ to… innovate enough, to let others stand with you, and… lighten the work, while you-all do it as one?”
She ceased looking him in the eye, cast hers to the rug.
“Law, Goss, it’d hurt me to lose you thuswise so much.”
And there was a quiet.
“No, Molly, I’m simply workin’ through the old ways. Gettin’ our family sword all ready, ’cause no sword ever failed to fire from damp or dirty powder yet.” (The British Kingdom had good muskets. The Hills people had, well, a thing much like a Kentucky Long Rifle with silencer. And less familiar tools, too.)
“Sorry, if you thought I mean to go all… one-man-alone on ‘im.”
And she smiled. Bright and cheerful and (in old-World terms) chilling as a high-country cold snap in mid-January. “So, may I get down your long-rifle now, and clean its report-muffler for us?”
And soon the old words of that Old World song rang bright and clear in the soft, warm lamplight of an upper room in Goss Moon’s house.
She unfastened and disassambled, he polished and sharpened.
Weaving her high counter-harmony in around the low foundation of his own main-line plainsong. In what was by now a song to declare, like those old swords that must taste blood once drawn, a very old flavor of intent.
“Hang down your head, Tom Dooley,
Hang down your head and cry;
Hang down your head, Tom Dooley,
Poor boy, you’re bound to die.”
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“Once more unto the breach, dear friends,” sighed Delbert as he started the still. “Once more unto a crazy hillbilly circus act for Martian tourists.”
“The hayull you cryin’ for?” scolded Clem. “This crazy hillbilly circus act for them Martian tourists netted us a cool thirty-five hundred just last weekend!”
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“Design a Howland Technologies Companion for that Brewster boy?” cried Agnes Slim-Howland. “What on Earth for? He’s a right punk!”
“That’s precisely the point,” explained her brother Nigel. “Can’t we design something the boy can’t bully, that won’t cry when it’s hit, and will give as good as it gets?”
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Nice set of promos today! MOAR books to read!!! :-)
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Prince Espar looked too young for his age. It was an odd thing to think, especially since he couldn’t be more than a year younger than Kailen. Probably not even that. But he did.
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Okay, that clearly didn’t work. Ugh.
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Yack! How did THAT happen?!?
Though Our Good Fast Friend Willie Pete is well-known to some of us for starting to roll the dreaded “Your comment is awaiting moderation” dice at or barely over ~8000 characters (there’s a reason my vignette above is just below that maybe-limit, and it’s not only a bit of determined gets-only-shorter editing), the part of your (welcomed and much awaited) post above that ‘made it through’ to the comments page is surely well under that, even without counting carefully.
So (alas) it’s not even clear to me where the trouble (or excuse for WP to make trouble) lies.
Maybe it would be worth making sure your original text is ‘pure’ text (no possibility of any ‘funny’ control or non-ASCII characters, if you know how to ‘hack’ that)? Maybe some ‘bad’ explicit HTML formatting tags (the strange formatting above looks like some sort of ‘program text display’ mode, or something) lurk there??
Sometimes it’s seemed to me like ‘Willie P. simply hates your post and wants it never to see the light of day here’ — and I know I’m not alone in it. Please do, within reason, persist!
If nothing else, perhaps try short-ish snippets (2 K chars. or so??) taking up right where the last one that worked left off… with all good wishes from afar.
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(salutes)
Trying to copy-paste from a word document keeps doing that, but it’s easier than trying to write it all over again.
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Prince Espar looked too young for his age. It was an odd thing to think, especially since he couldn’t be more than a year younger than Kailen. Probably not even that. But he did.
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Probably something you got by growing up in Sigfrey’s Towers, rather than the streets of Lower Whitecliffe. That sort of innocence, that lightness. That pride, too – he knelt before Sigfrey’s Lightgiver, but his shoulders did not bend. His gaze only wavered from the high priest’s face to glance at Kailen and Foray on either side, a smile flashing over his face for an instant before being swallowed again by a look of solemnity that seemed forced.
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As smoke and the heavy smell of incense rose from the brazier in his arms, Kailen wondered if that smile was meant to taunt or reassure. He didn’t know the prince, would never see him again after the anointing. He probably wouldn’t even think of him again, except in passing. But if his younger brother was anything to go by, it was probably meant to be friendly. Assuming ‘Respi’ really was as friendly as he seemed, assuming it wasn’t all an act.
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Odd. They lived so far above everyone else, even by Avigar’s standards. But they didn’t act like it at all. He wasn’t sure whether to believe it or not.
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“Your Majesty,” the Lightbearer intoned, lifting his gaze to the king. “Do you here pronounce Espar, eldest son of Sigfrey’s Chosen, Prince-in-Waiting and Beloved of Light, to be your chosen heir?”
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Espar did not turn his head, did not look towards his father. But Kailen thought he saw a flicker of nervousness in his eyes, something like doubt. If the prince were an enemy, now would be the time to strike. But he wasn’t, and there was no need for a fight, no matter how uncomfortable Kailen was with the crowd behind him.
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King Gelar smiled, his Queen’s hand clasped in his own. Kailen wasn’t quite sure how to parse that expression, but the smile looked real, and there was no cruelty in it. So it was probably safe. “I do.”
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There was a noise from far behind Kailen, something like a stifled cry. It wasn’t close enough to be one of the dukes, and it came from directly behind rather than off to the left or right, where the lords stood. So it probably came from somewhere among the crowd.
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